Copy editor for a 6-panel investor brochure (trifold, ~550 words, fixed price)

Hi,

We're Yummy Future, a small robotics company. We run robotic coffee and matcha cafes in Palo Alto, CA and Champaign, IL, and we're raising money through a Wefunder crowdfunding round. In our stores we hand out a printed trifold brochure to customers who want to learn about investing.

The design is finished, but the writing still needs work. Some lines are stiff, like "We have built a production workhorse that runs fast and produces highly consistent product and results." Others sound machine-written. We want it to read like a person talking to a curious customer.

The job:

- About 550 words across 6 panels of an A4 trifold

- Edit and rewrite for clarity and voice, in US English

- The text has to fit the existing layout, so each panel has a word limit

- No new facts, numbers or claims. The investment terms, risk wording and data sources stay as written, because our lawyer reviews those

- Deliver tracked changes in Google Docs or Word, with one round of revisions after our feedback

- Finished within 5 business days

To quote, please send:

1. A fixed price for the whole job

2. When you could deliver

3. Two samples of marketing copy you've edited or written (print, brochures, or anything for investors is ideal)

4. A sentence or two on how you'd fix the headline quoted above. No full rewrite needed; we just want to see how you think.

If you've edited crowdfunding or other investment copy before, please mention it. That's a plus but not required.

Thanks,

Jack

Yummy Future